itsabluebanana's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Matrix is Still Awesome]

Really like the overall composition and the perspective of some poses here, specifically the ones in the middle where the characters are brandishing weapons. I think the pose on the bottom looks a little weird though, as it's a bit hard to tell what the man is doing (i.e. is he skydiving or looking upwards?). I feel like it might be due to the orientation of his face.

[Heavy]

This is an excellent abstract illustration. The monologue really helps intensify the mood the illustration creates.

[For Caddy]

Really like the vibrant color palette in this illustration. If you're looking to get into animation more, then I suggest delving more into the concept of timing and spacing. For example, the blinking of the eyes here can be delayed a bit more, so that it looks more realistic.

arkoirisangel responds:

Thank you!! I'll definitely do this next time :)

[Orange]

The colors and character design are cute as always, but I feel there's something uncanny about Liena's pose. Her torso is leaning a lot to her right, but her feet aren't positioned to support her shifted center of mass enough. It feels more obvious to me if I imagine the pose without her tail being present. Moving her right foot a bit more to the right would probably help make the pose look more natural while still preserving her line of action from her neck to her left foot.

[Yooo what the Pam doing??]

this confirms that pam is an egg

Sangiez responds:

Funni little eggdog

[Melon! Froggy Juice Drink Label]

this is a good sequel

KEKIIRO responds:

hehe thank you :3

[Maid Pram]

prinny

[smoll BOOTS]

I think the pose can be improved a bit in terms of line of action. The character's torso is pretty straight, but she's raising her right shoulder. If you make the torso lean to her right such that it makes sense with her raised shoulder, it should improve the pose and the overall shape language.

I also think the word "boots" is too packed together in the dialogue box; the "T and "S" are hard to interpret at first glance.

Quenek responds:

Thank you for the critique, will definitely keep it in mind

[Bells]

There’s no need to apologize for posting art less often. It’s always good to take care of yourself first.

[Geometry Geoffrey]

yeah geometry!